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Why dialogue flows but action and setting feel forced

I can write dialogue that sounds natural but I struggle with the parts between the talking and my scenes feel like floating conversations in empty space

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Facility with human speech can mask deficiencies in spatial awareness and physical grounding that make scenes feel ethereal rather than embodied.

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